Nowadays more and more people have access to the internet. However, constant availability of any information worsen people's memory and critical thinking skills. Agree or disagree.

There is no doubt that the
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of
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. A faction of people
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the notion that the widespread of
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is
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adversely
affected the memory and critical thinking
ability
of human
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. I
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agree with
this
view as ample reasons present to substantiate it. First and foremost,
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over-depending
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information technology may reduce
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memorizing
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. In detail, contemporary
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world, the masses
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not
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to memorise since
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electronic devices with
internet
connection
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can access data whenever needed.
For example
,
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the
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online
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applications
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as
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google
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for
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everyone,
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the the
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language learning is not any more a
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with
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the
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people who have different
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dialogue
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.
Furthermore
, the
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critical
thinking
ability
of the
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, arguably,
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significantly
declined by continuous use of the
internet
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scholars refer books and articles to resolve
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complex mathematical equations,
however
,
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these can be done within minutes by using
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tools
.
Similarly
,
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learning
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has
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affected by the use of online translators.To exemplify, artificial
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tools
such
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widly
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for academic
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, the learners complete their assignments using these cutting-edge technology
tools
. In conclusion,
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enables ample online
tools
,
which
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is detrimental to
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critical thinking and memorising
abillity
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abilities
. I believe that the
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of
internet
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has negatively affected not only
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memorisng abillity
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memorising ability
but
also
for
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critical thinking
ability
.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • diminishes
  • shallow processing
  • critical evaluation
  • misinformation
  • unprecedented
  • discerningly
  • intellectual laziness
  • interactive content
  • problem-solving
  • actively engaged
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