Line Chart Shows Serious Violent Crime Levels From 1978 To 2000 In The US IELTS Academic Writing Task 1

The given chart depicts levels of extremely severe crime between 1978 and 2000 in the US. Generally, the total amount of violence and the

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of victims who reported to the police experienced fluctuations but

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decreased over the examined time . Meanwhile, the crimes which were recorded by

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and the criminals arrested for violent

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grew throughout the entire period.

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with, in terms of violent acts, the trend showed a constant change, which started with 3.5

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of

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in 1978. After some ups and downs within a decade, the figure rose to its peak, which was 4.5

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in 1988. It

then

gradually decreased to the lowest

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at 3

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cases

in 2000.

Similarly

, the victimisations reported to the police

also

changed moderately. In 1978, the

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harassment

informed was just over 2

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and had few slight growths and falls for about 10 years. In 1990, the trend climbed for the

last

time to nearly 2.5

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before it dipped to its smallest

cases

, for about 1,5

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cases

in 2000