The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagrams compare the central library floor plan from 20 years ago to now.
Overall
, nowadays, there are
significant development of the function in each Change the verb form
is
room
of the library. Moreover
, several rooms have been transformed into a new shape.
At
the north-west, Change preposition
In
room
for CDs, videos, and computer games has been replaced by children's fiction Correct article usage
the room
books
and place
for storytelling events Correct article usage
a place
within
Change preposition
on
sofa
inside the Correct article usage
the sofa
room
. This
space also
become larger than before. Below that, adult fiction books
relocated
to the east and replaced by all reference Add a missing verb
were relocated
books
. Move
to the Wrong verb form
Moving
south east
, the reading Correct your spelling
southeast
room
had
demolished and it has been transformed into a computer Verb problem
was
room
.
In the center
of Change the spelling
centre
this
area, tables and chairs already
Add a missing verb
have already
removed
, so that it Add a missing verb
been removed
become
unused now. Change the verb form
becomes
Furthermore
, a new lecture room
located in north east
Correct your spelling
northeast
subtitute
the children's Correct your spelling
substitute
books
. Next to it, adult non-fiction books
had been demolished and change
into information Wrong verb form
changed
desk
and self-service machines. Fix the agreement mistake
desks
Lastly
, in the south east
, Correct your spelling
southeast
enquiry
desk Correct article usage
the enquiry
replaced
by Add a missing verb
was replaced
cafe
with a different shape of Add an article
a cafe
the cafe
the
Correct article usage
apply
room
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words room, books with synonyms.
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