The diagram illustrates the Life Cycle process of frogs in a pond. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.
The given diagram gives information about
frogs
’ cycle of life in a pond. In general, frogs
undergo eleven processes of life, commencing with eggs to become adults ready to breed.
The process starts with eggs laid by an adult frog, and then
the eggs develop naturally into embryos. After some days, the embryos become tadpoles, which are generally black in colour and have a big head and a tail
. The tadpoles then
cling to water-plant in order to continue their lives. Furthermore
, the external gills rise in tadpoles to help them breathe, and their tail
keeps on growing in line with their growth.
In the next cycle, hind legs appear between their body and tail
. In this
stage, their lives depend on food stored in the tail
. In several days, their front legs appear and their tail
becomes shorter. The tail
then
disappears as they develop as young frogs
. The young frogs
then
become adult frogs
. When mating season comes, adult frogs
seek their partner to reproduce.Submitted by misstiasclassroom on
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