the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedan, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedan, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
The line chart illustrates the
amount
of emissions of carbon dioxide for each individual in some nations
such
as the United
Kingdom
,
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal throughout the
period
from 1967 to 2007. Looking from an
overall
perspective, it is readily apparent that among these four different nations, the United
Kingdom
as well as
Sweden
witnessed a downward trend,
in contrast
, the other two countries
such
as, Italy and Portugal experienced an upward trend during the given
period
. From the graph, it can be seen that in the United
Kingdom
, the number of carbon dioxide, which was released over the given
period
decreased gradually from about 11
tonnes
in 1967 to nearly 9 metric
tonnes
in 2007.
However
,
this
amount
in
Sweden
also
declined but the number of emotions in 1967 was just over 8 metric
tonnes
but
then
it rose sharply to about 11 metric
tonnes
after that it started to fall significantly to approximately 5 metric
tonnes
by 2007.
On the other hand
,
although
Italy witnessed fluctuation during the given
period
the
amount
claimed rapidly from nearly 4.5 metric
tonnes
in 1967 to almost 8 metric
tonnes
in 2007.
While
Portugal like Italy experienced growth in the given time
this
amount
first started from just over 2 metric
tonnes
in 1967 to nearly 6 metric
tonnes
just like the
amount
of numbers which was recorded for
Sweden
.the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United
Kingdom
,
Swedan
Correct your spelling
Sweden
, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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