the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedan, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.

the graph below shows average carbon dioxide emissions per person in the United Kingdom, Swedan, Italy and Portugal between 1967 and 2007.
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The graph illustrates the number of
carbon
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dioxide
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emissions for each person in four countries including the United Kingdom, Sweden, Italy and Portugal from 1967 to 2007.
Overall
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it is clear that
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people who live in the United Kingdom emitted the most
carbon
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dioxide
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,
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Sweden had a considerable decrease after 1977. As we can see, in 1967, there were 11
tonnes
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of
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dioxide
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which were generated by the residents in the United Kingdom, followed by a slight decrease, it accounted for 9
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at the end
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of the period.
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although
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the emissions of
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dioxide
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in Sweden increased by 3
tonnes
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from 8 to 11 in 1977, it declined sharply to 7 and
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only 5
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in 2007.
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, Portugal had the lowest number at the beginning of the period, which was approximately only 1.8
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, it started to rise smoothly and reached a peak at 4
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in 2007. Italy had the same trend as Portugal, which was 7
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in 2007.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words carbon, dioxide, tonnes with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "decrease" was used 2 times.
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