The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in there different countries.
The below chart demonstrates the number of residents aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in different countries. It is conspicuous
Japan
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a
significant growth in the future. All of the lines have upswire tend.
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the USA
approximtely
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approximately
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Japan
will have a Use synonyms
dramatically
growth in 2022 until 2040. Change the adverb
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, In 1940, almost 6 percent of the society in Sweden was Linking Words
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elderly
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the USA
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graph illustrates how many of the population in Linking Words
USA
, Sweden and Correct article usage
the USA
Japan
aged 65 or older between 1940 and 2040. All of the lines have upswire Use synonyms
tend
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trends
Japan
have considerable growth in 2022 approximately.Use synonyms
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