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The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in there different countries.

The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in there different countries.
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The below chart demonstrates the number of residents aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in different countries. It is conspicuous
Japan
 will have
a
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significant growth in the future. All of the lines have upswire tend.
According to
 the graph,
USA
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the USA
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 had a more population who aged 65 between 1940 and 1990
approximtely
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approximately
.
Moreover
,
Japan
 will have a
dramatically
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 growth in 2022 until 2040.
furthermore
, In 1940, almost 6 percent of the society in Sweden was
elder
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elderly
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.
In addition
, In
USA
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the USA
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, In 1980, three-quarters of
community
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the community
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were
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was
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 old.
Also
, In 1980, slightly
less
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fewer
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 than
The
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in The
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 United States of America were
old
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in Sweden.
overall
,
this
 graph illustrates how many of the population in
USA
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the USA
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, Sweden and
Japan
 aged 65 or older between 1940 and 2040. All of the lines have upswire
tend
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trends
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, but
Japan
 have considerable growth in 2022 approximately.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Introduction: The chart intro is missing.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words japan with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 3 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • proportion
  • aged 65 and over
  • depicted
  • population
  • changes
  • span of 100 years
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