The charts shows air pollution levels by different causes among four countries in 2012.
The presented bar graph presents information about the comparison of air
pollution
levels
in the company of four countries in 2012, with a focus on three main sources
: electricity
generation
, transport
and industry
.
Overall
, China had the highest levels
of air pollution
across all three sources
, while
Australia had the lowest. Transport
was the leading cause of pollution
in America, whereas
in Japan, industry
was the primary contributor.
China experienced the most significant pollution
from industry
at around 80 Add an article
the industry
PPM
, followed by transport
and electricity
generation
, both exceeding 50 PPM
. In contrast
, America’s highest pollution
source was
Change the verb form
was transported
transport
at approximately 60 PPM
, with electricity
generation
and industry
contributing less but still substantial levels
.
Japan had the highest pollution
from industry
at about 45 Add an article
the industry
PPM
, while
transport
and electricity
generation
were lower, each below 30 PPM
. Australia showed the least pollution
, with all sources
contributing under 20 PPM
, and transport
being the highest among them.
In summary, China and America had significant pollution
from specific sources
, whereas
Japan and Australia had relatively balanced and lower pollution
levels
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