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The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The maps below shows university sports courts in 1990 and now. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The two maps illustrate certain university game courts in the year 1990 and
at
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the present.
Overall
,
it is clear that
 the
park
 that was there in the year 1990 is not available presently.
Additionally
, the car
park
 that was present is
nolonger
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no longer
 available but
then
 the cafe has maintained
it's
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its
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 position. Looking into details,
firstly
,the
park
 that was there before has now been turned into a basketball
court
.
Secondly
, the car
park
 that was present in 1990 has now been replaced with
the
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a
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 tennis
court
.
Thirdly
, the outdoor pool has been displaced by the indoor pool.
Fouthly
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Fourthly
, the reception and the cafe have maintained
there
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their
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 position but the changing room that was beside the reception has been taken next to the fitness centre.
Last
 but not least the tennis
court
 that was on the left side has now been moved to the right side of the map and replaced
the
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with the
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 car
park
.
Moreover
, the tennis
court
 has been expanded in size compared to the smaller size it had before.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words park, court with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 5 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 3 times.
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