The bar chart shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The bar chart shows transport preferences among young people in four countries in a single year.

Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The chart shows the choice of transportation among young adults in the UK, the United States, France and Italy. Car is the highest choice for the majority of the countries, followed by bicycle, and
lastly
by motorcycle. In Italy, the percentage of cars is the highest with more than 70%,
however
, the portion of motorcycles and bicycles is below 15%. In the UK and the United States, the figures for car choices are the same at 69%,
while
the portion of motorcycles in the US
as well as
bicycles in the UK
also
have equal values of about 30% and 15% for other transportation These countries. In France, the average percentage of transport inclination is below half of the young population, with bicycles is the highest at less than 50%, followed by cars at about 40%, and the
last
is motorcycles is slightly above 10%.
Overall
, the car is the favourite choice for youngsters in most countries, but the motorcycle is the least favourable option
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