The table shows about underground railway system
The provided graph depicts information about
underground
Correct article usage
the underground
railway
system in six cities (London, Paris, Tokyo, Washington DC, Kyoto
and Los
Angeles
).
Overall
, London's
had the oldest system and the most Change noun form
London
kilometres
of route
. Tkoyo's had the most passengers
in each of year
. Los
Angeles's
had the latest system. But Change noun form
Angeles
Kyoto
's got the less kilometres
of route
and passengers
per year
.
Turning to details, Lodon's railway
started in 1863. It got
394 Verb problem
has
kilometres
of route
. Tokyo's
opened Change noun form
Tokyo
at
1927, but it had Change preposition
in
1927million
Correct your spelling
1927 million
passengers
per year
.
Kyoto
's railway
opened at
1981. After 20 years, Change preposition
in
Los
Angeles
's railway
opened. But Los
Angeles
railway
's kilometres
of route
and passengers
were more than Kyoto
's. Kyoto
just had 11 km and 45million
Correct your spelling
45 million
passengers
per year
.Submitted by asllchkied on
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