Many people think that TV has a positive impact on children’s creativity skills, while others believe that watching TV is damaging creative skills. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
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TV obviously is the most common form in households. The statement that whether TV exerts a creativity-oriented influence on juveniles is both agreed upon and disagreed by many. The two sides of
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argument will be thoroughly analyzed and discussed before drawing a reasoned conclusion.
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Introduction Adequacy
Provide a more structured introduction, clearly outlining the views you will discuss and stating your opinion.
Body Paragraph Development
Expand the essay by adding well-organized paragraphs that discuss the two viewpoints and your opinion with supporting arguments and examples.
Use of Cohesive Devices
Work on transitions and logical connectors throughout the essay to enhance the flow and clarity of your arguments.
Conclusion Effectiveness
Write a clear conclusion that summarizes the main points and restates your opinion succinctly.
Completeness of Response
Ensure you fully respond to all parts of the task, providing adequate explanation and development of ideas.
Idea Development and Support
In each body paragraph, aim to develop one clear idea regarding the impact of TV on children's creativity, supported by specific examples or evidence.
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