The table below gives information about a bakery's average sales in three different branches in 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main ifeatures, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
The table depicts information about the rates of bakery sales in three stores in 2015, broken down into five different criteria.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the highest value is in Linking Words
London
Covent Garden, Use synonyms
while
the lowest number is in Linking Words
London
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St
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John’s
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Wood
. It is Use synonyms
also
interesting to note that all of the stores have different popular items.
With regards to Linking Words
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number of transactions, Correct article usage
the
London
Covent Garden achieved the highest contribution for 642 transactions as opposed to Use synonyms
London
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St
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John’s
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Wood
which had nearly less than a third by 269. Use synonyms
Similarly
, the former Linking Words
also
contributed the largest transaction value at 7.58 pounds compared to two other stores which had less value at 4.51 pounds and 5.01 pounds in Linking Words
London
Oxford Circus and in Use synonyms
London
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St
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John’s
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Wood
respectively. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, the rest of the criteria about Linking Words
a
number of eat-in and takeaway sales had the same trend with the first store achieving the highest proportion of more than 300 transactions.
In terms of the popularity of items that have been sold, the croissant was the most interesting bakery in the first store, Correct article usage
the
while
medium latte was the most sold out in the second store. Linking Words
Moreover
, in Linking Words
London
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St
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John’s
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Wood
, buyers preferred to purchase strawberry tarts.Use synonyms
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
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Basic structure: Change the third paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words london, st, john’s, wood with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the third paragraph.
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