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The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below gives information about the percentage of the population in four Asian countries living in cities from 1970 to 2020, with predictions for 2030 and 2040. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The depicted line chart delineates the percentage of individuals who have been living in four distinct Asian countries from 1970 to 2020,
as well as
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 forecasts for 2030 and 2040.
Overall
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, as can be seen, the
population
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 ratio in all areas faced an increased pattern from 1970 to 2020 and
also
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 continued to swell in 2030 and 2040. It is noticeable that the proportion of folks who live in Malaysia sharply increased from 1990 to 2020,
while
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, contrastingly, residents of the Philippines fell gradually in the same period. The most striking part would be that
although
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 in 1970 Indonesia had the least amount of
population
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 with just above 10% respectively, it is predicted in 2040 it will have roughly 60% Asian
population
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.
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, from 1970 to 1980, the ratio of
population
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 in the Philippines reached a plateau, from 1980 to 1990, the number reached a peak of approximately 50%,
however
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, from 1990 onward the amount started to plunge to nearly 40%.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words population with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "ratio" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "reached" was used 2 times.
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