The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons where relevant.
The graph below illustrates the amount of tourists visiting a specific Caribbean
island
over a 7-year period, between 2010 and 2017.
In general, it can be seen that most visitors preferred to visit the Use synonyms
island
Use synonyms
instead
of staying on Linking Words
cruise
ships in 2010, Use synonyms
while
in 2017 Linking Words
cruise
ships were more popular.
If we look at the Use synonyms
cruise
ship tourists in the first 4 Use synonyms
years
, it fluctuated between 0.25 and 0.5. Use synonyms
Cruise
ship rate increased dramatically in the next 4 Use synonyms
years
from 0.5 to 2. Despite Use synonyms
island
visitors remaining stable in the first year, it had a sharp rise between 2011 and 2013 when reached a peak at 1.5 and Use synonyms
then
leveled off for the next 2 Linking Words
years
. Use synonyms
Although
, In the Linking Words
last
2 Linking Words
years
Use synonyms
island
tourists had a fluctuation, Use synonyms
cruise
ships got more popular and had greater visitors in number, compared to 1.5 and 2 respectively. The total number of people who had been on Use synonyms
Correct article usage
the Carribean
Carribean
Correct your spelling
Caribbean
island
rocketed from 1 to 3.5 after 7 Use synonyms
years
.Use synonyms
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 70%.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island, cruise, years with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
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