The graph below shows information on employment rates across 6 countries in 1995 and 2005. Summarise the information by choosing and describe the main idea, and make comparisons where appropriate.

The given bar chart illustrates how much employment

rates

in

a

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6 different

countries

changed between 1995 and 2005.

Overall

, it can be seen that all

countries

experienced growth

rates

in both

gender

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genders

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. Gentlemen in Iceland headed the list over the given period,

while

this

record can be seen for ladies in Switzerland. Iceland's men

rates

rose 10% from 70% to nearly 82% in 1995 and 2005,

meanwhile

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meanwhile,

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Switzerland's men experienced around 13% growth from 65% to approximately 78%. Women in Iceland and

Switzerland

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Switzerland's

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employement

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employment

rates

increased nearly 12% from 40% to 52% and 10% from 55% to 67% respectively.

In

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the other hand, for the rest 4

countries

: Australia, the UK, the USA and New Zealand share the familiar position regarding the male

rates

in both years, which

was

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were

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about 57% and 69% in Australia, 56% and 71% in the UK, 60% and 71% in New Zealand and 59% and 71% in the USA for both 1955 and 2005. In the meantime, the percentage employment

rates

in these

countries

for women were lesser than men with almost 28% and 39% in Australia, 50% and 62% in the UK, 24% and 43% in New Zealand and

lastly

45% and 62% in the USA.