The given map illustrates how the waterfront area of a town called Darwin developed over a 5 years period from 2009 to 2014.

The given map illustrates how the waterfront area of a town called Darwin developed over a 5 years period from 2009 to 2014.
The given
map
illustrates how the waterfront
area
of a town called Darwin developed over a 5 years period from 2009 to 2014. At first glance, It can be seen that the south
area
of the
map
has some noticeable change. The industrial
area
has transformed with the growth of trees with a footpath that leads to a new harbour that has just been built at the seaside. To the upper left of the old industrial
area
, a new university building has just been
found
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, followed by the increase in residential
building
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between the new uni and the swimming pool. To the north of the
map
, there have not been many changes occurring in
this
area
. The only change that can be seen is that the industrial
area
in the middle of the circular footpath and to the left of the lake has been replaced by a brand new swimming pool.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the most changes in the waterfront
area
of Darwin are occurring in the south of the
map
with the most noticeable one being that the whole industrial
area
has been replaced by an
area
of trees.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words map, area with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "undefined" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
Vocabulary: The word "map" was used 4 times.
Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 4 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • waterfront development
  • residential areas
  • commercial zones
  • infrastructure
  • environmental impact
  • facilities
  • urban transformation
  • pedestrian pathways
  • public transit
  • housing units
  • construction
  • expansion
  • renovation
  • aesthetic enhancements
  • recreational spaces
  • drawbacks
  • historic preservation
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