the diagram below shows the steps followed by recycled aluminum cans
The charts illustrate the flow
process
for recycled aluminum
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aluminium
cans
from waste
to new cans
.
Overall
, it can be seen that the four processes. Firstly
the collection center collects aluminium cans
from waste
sources. Secondly
, the recycling process
.Thirdly
aluminium recycling plant. Lastly
, the drinks machine.
From the recycling process
apparent the first process
is the collection centre. This
process
is aluminum
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aluminium
cans
from collecting waste
and transporting it to the next process
. In the following process
, the recycling center
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centre
this
process
must be separated into four sections. To begin
with,
melts down old Remove the comma
apply
aluminum
from Change the spelling
aluminium
waste
. Next process
, there is a new aluminum
bar. After that send to the next Change the spelling
aluminium
process
called aluminium roll for roll the bar to sheets. In the final process
, they press to make cans
.
After the manufacturing process
, they would transport new cans
to the drinks machine for the customer. The process
must move to the collecting center
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centre
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