The graph shows the percentage of male and female academic staff members across the facilities of a major university in 2012.
The bar chart illustrates information about the proportion of academic
staff
, by gender, across the faculties of a major university in 2012.
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Overall
, major differences can be seen in education and engineering, where the proportion of students, by gender, was enormous. Linking Words
Whereas
, in other majors, it is properly balanced in one way or another.
Business and science had the majority of men, where they accounted for 65% Linking Words
for
both majors. Change preposition
of
On the other hand
, medicine was properly balanced, inclining towards Linking Words
women
by 1 per cent. Use synonyms
By contrast
, engineering had an enormous gender gap, where Linking Words
women
comprised only 15% of academic Use synonyms
staff
.
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Nevertheless
, the same tendency but the opposite is for education, where female Linking Words
staff
members accounted for 75% Use synonyms
totally
. In comparison, the percentage of arts is 55 for Change the word
total
women
and 45 for men respectively. Law, Use synonyms
on the other hand
, had 60% of men in academic Linking Words
staff
, where it was 40% for Use synonyms
women
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