The diagram below shows the floor plan of a public library 20 years ago and how it looks now. Summarise the selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant
The diagram depicts the the floor plan of the public library 20 years ago and its current look.
Overall
, the plan keeps the general scheme of the plan as it is still divided for two sides by a long corridor only it was renewed with up-to-date facilities through time.
When people entered the central library 20 years ago, they could notice the room
for reading newspapers and magazines on the right side
and the enquiry desk on the left side
. Currently, the reading space has changed into a computer room
and enquiry desk to the cafe. If people follow this
long corridor, it is noticeable that the lines of fiction books
for adults in
the right Change preposition
on
side
of the library which was
replaced on the left Correct subject-verb agreement
were
side
now, as well
as
there were added self-service machines there too. The space for adult non-fiction was removed totally. In the place of previous adult fiction Correct word choice
and
books
were located all reference books
. The room
for CDs, video and computer games was changed into the room
of events for telling stories and with space for children's fiction books
. The previous children's room
was changed into a lecture room
which was lacking previously.Submitted by nurayeva_b on
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