Annual Rainfall in Kona, Hawaii The graph and table below show the average monthly rainfalls and average annual rainfalls for three towns in the district of Kona in Hawaii for a 30-year period (1971-2000). Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words
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The line graph
illustrate
the Change the verb form
illustrates
rate
of monthly rainfall
and the rate
of rainfall
for three town
in the district of Kona in Hawaii period 1971 to 2000. Change to a plural noun
towns
Overall
, Kainaliu had a rate
of precipitation on period
of Juni to September for Add an article
the period
a period
a
30 years.
Based on the data, the highest Correct the article-noun agreement
apply
rainfall's
Change noun form
rainfall
level
in Fix the agreement mistake
levels
three
Correct article usage
the three
village
were Change to a plural noun
villages
Change preposition
in july
july
and Change the capitalization
July
september
. It was noted that the Holualua had a figure of Change the capitalization
September
rate
monthly rainfall
at 12 centimetres in July, and then
the Kainaliu had a number of rate
at about 17 centimetres in September. At
Change preposition
In
same
month, the Opihihale had Add an article
the same
a
highest Change the article
the
rate
of rainfall
at about 11 centimetre
.
The Change to a plural noun
centimetres
Desember
was the month with the lowest Correct your spelling
December
of
precipitation along Change preposition
apply
of
the year. In the Holualua, it decreased to the lowest at below 6 Change preposition
apply
centimetre
. In the Opihihale, it Change to a plural noun
centimetres
decleaned
to about 6,2 Correct your spelling
decreased
that
before Correct word choice
apply
had
fluctutation Unnecessary verb
apply
along
the year, and in the Kainaliu, it went Change preposition
over
go
down sharply to 6,3 centimetres.Verb problem
apply
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