The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

#waste #collection #centre

The bar chart provides information about different kinds of trash collected as

tonnes

by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.All figures are shown as

tonnes

Overall

, all varieties of waste experienced fluctuations throughout the period.

Although

paper trash was collected

higher

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than any other garbage items

whilegarden

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related trash

wasthe

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was the

lowest amount that

wascollected

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was collected

from 2011 to 2015. With regards to paper, it was about 57

tonnes

in 2011, being higher than the other types.

Then

it continued to decline to 40 in 2013 and started to grow steadily from 2013

and

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reaching its peak of 70

tonnes

. Glass-related garbage didn't show a significant trend

while

it was almost 48 at the beginning and showed fluctuations and reaching 52

at the end

of the period.

Furthermore

, Tins collected was 35 in 2013 which suddenly decreased to 27 in the following year.

However

, it began to rise from 2012 except

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for the

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the

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slight drop in 2014 and

finally

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it reached

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39. With regards to garden garbage, those collected was 32 in 2011 which dropped dramatically to 15

tonnes

in the year of 2012.

However

, It started to rise and which had risen to 31

tonnes

in 2013 before it dropped to 27 in 2014 again.

However

, again it rose to 35

tonnes

in 2015.

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