The chart below shows waste collection by a recycling centre from 2011 to 2015

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The bar chart provides information about different kinds of trash collected as

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by a recycling centre between 2011 and 2015.All figures are shown as

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, all varieties of waste experienced fluctuations throughout the period.

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paper trash was collected

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than any other garbage items

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related trash

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was the

lowest amount that

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was collected

from 2011 to 2015. With regards to paper, it was about 57

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in 2011, being higher than the other types.

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it continued to decline to 40 in 2013 and started to grow steadily from 2013

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reaching its peak of 70

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. Glass-related garbage didn't show a significant trend

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it was almost 48 at the beginning and showed fluctuations and reaching 52

at the end

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of the period.

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, Tins collected was 35 in 2013 which suddenly decreased to 27 in the following year.

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, it began to rise from 2012 except

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slight drop in 2014 and

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it reached

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39. With regards to garden garbage, those collected was 32 in 2011 which dropped dramatically to 15

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in the year of 2012.

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, It started to rise and which had risen to 31

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in 2013 before it dropped to 27 in 2014 again.

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, again it rose to 35

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in 2015.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "however".

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Vocabulary: Replace the words tonnes with synonyms.

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Vocabulary: The word "show" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "rise" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "fluctuations" was used 2 times.

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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.

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meeting the goal of 7 or more
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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 8.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Introduction & conclusion present

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

4 paragraphs

212 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

recycling centre
waste management
total waste collected
trends
categories
significant increases/decreases
analysis
public awareness
recycling policies
implications
future strategies
sustainable practices
waste reduction
data interpretation
environmental impact

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