Your friend is coming to your country from abroad, but you can't go to pick him up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her and say -why you can't pick him up -suggest alternative ideas -talk about what he can do in your country

#friend #country #airport #-why #-suggest #alternative #-talk

Dear Ram, I hope you are doing well. I am very happy to hear about you that you are coming to our country for

visit

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a visit

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. I am writing

this

letter to inform you that I will not be available to pick you

from

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up from

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the airport

due to

some urgent work at

office

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the office

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Firstly

, I am sorry to inform you that I have an urgent official meeting in Pune at that

time

Furthermore

, I am only the

concern

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concerned

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person who will take care

these

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of these

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things over there.

However

, I arranged a taxi for you to pick up on

time

as well as

, my elder brother will be there to welcome you because you are coming first

time

in India. So that you can feel more comfortable without any unwanted

problem

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problems

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. After taking some rest,

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the next

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day you can explore the city and visit some historic places near

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apply

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my home. So that you know more about our culture. The day after tomorrow, I will come back from office and

then

we will spend

time

with each other. I hope you will understand my situation. Thanking You, Yours Loving Friend, Amit

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Task Achievement

Make sure you address all parts of the task. While your letter provides information about why you can't pick up your friend, and suggests an alternative, it is less clear about things your friend can do in your country. Be specific by providing more detailed suggestions or examples.

Coherence and Cohesion

Your letter has a clear structure, but can benefit from better paragraph organization. Aim to concentrate on one main idea per paragraph and use a wider range of cohesive devices to link your ideas more effectively.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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7Linking words
meeting the goal of 7 or more
1Word repetition
meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
8Grammar mistakes
 

7 paragraphs

189 words

5.50

Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

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Your friend is coming to your country from abroad, but you can't go to pick him up at the airport. Write a letter to him/her and say -why you can't pick him up -suggest alternative ideas -talk about what he can do in your country

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

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ome people say that the main environmental problem of our time is the loss of particular species of plants and animals. Others say that there are more important environmental problems. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

What activities have you been involved in that have helped you or others overcome barriers while pursuing an interest in STEM learning?