The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at lea

The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at lea
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There is a pie chart and a table illustrating the percentage of
tourists
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who are going to Australia for a holiday at a particular resort.
Overall
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, the pie chart provides information about the percentage of
tourists
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based on their region,
while
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the table provides details about the
tourists
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. In decreasing order, the
tourists
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come from Asia, Europe, US, and other countries. The
tourists
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who come to Australia are dominated by Asian people, which is about 37%. Based on the table, it is known that most Asian
tourists
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will spend 7 days in 5-star hotels. The next two are the European and the US, about 35% and 18%, respectively. The average of their stay is quite similar, around 14-16 days.
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, Europeans prefer to stay in a campsite or a caravan,
while
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Americans prefer to stay in a 4-star hotel.
Furthermore
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, the other countries are worth significantly less, only about 10%. They like to stay around 10 days, and similar to the Europeans, they prefer to stay in a campsite or a caravan.
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, they have different kinds of activities they like, except for Asian and American
tourists
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, they both love to go sightseeing.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "overall, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 80%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words tourists with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provides" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stay" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • holiday resort
  • demographic data
  • fluctuations
  • peak season
  • off-season
  • noticeable patterns
  • comparative language
  • correlations
  • trends
  • satisfaction ratings
  • dissect
  • recap
  • significent
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