The chart and table below give information about tourists at a particular holiday resort in Australia. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at lea
There is a pie chart and a table illustrating the percentage of
tourists
who are going to Australia for a holiday at a particular resort. Use synonyms
Overall
, the pie chart provides information about the percentage of Linking Words
tourists
based on their region, Use synonyms
while
the table provides details about the Linking Words
tourists
.
In decreasing order, the Use synonyms
tourists
come from Asia, Europe, US, and other countries. The Use synonyms
tourists
who come to Australia are dominated by Asian people, which is about 37%. Based on the table, it is known that most Asian Use synonyms
tourists
will spend 7 days in 5-star hotels. The next two are the European and the US, about 35% and 18%, respectively. The average of their stay is quite similar, around 14-16 days. Use synonyms
Moreover
, Europeans prefer to stay in a campsite or a caravan, Linking Words
while
Americans prefer to stay in a 4-star hotel.
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Furthermore
, the other countries are worth significantly less, only about 10%. They like to stay around 10 days, and similar to the Europeans, they prefer to stay in a campsite or a caravan. Linking Words
Overall
, they have different kinds of activities they like, except for Asian and American Linking Words
tourists
, they both love to go sightseeing.Use synonyms
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