The map shows the centre of Paris. A company wants to open a new restaurant in the area. The map shows two possible locations for the restaurant.
The map shows the layout of
Paris
Correct article usage
the Paris
centre
, including two potential restaurants.
Overall
, it is clear that
the centre
is surrounded by various activities with bunch
of Add an article
a bunch
visitors
each day. There are four activities near the left bank in the south of the city
where the second possible restaurant
is located and over to the north side connected by three bridges across the River Seine to the right bank with three different activities and the first possible restaurant
.
Looking at the map closely, the first candidate restaurant
is located in the northwest part of the city
centre
near the north park on the right side and visitors
can reached
the first Change the verb form
reach
restaurant
's location by crossing the Bir-Hakeim Bridge. As for this
choice, there are 10.000 possible visitors
that can come across this
location.
Meanwhile, for
the second candidate Change preposition
apply
restaurant
is located near to
the Change preposition
apply
city
's landmark in the southern of the city
with the highest visitors
where the landmark Correct quantifier usage
number of visitors
located
Add a missing verb
is located
in
between the Art Gallery in the southeast and the Sports Change preposition
apply
Centre
on the southwest side of the Eiffel Tower. Visitors
who are located in the north of the city
can easyly
Correct your spelling
easily
reached
Change the verb form
reach
this
second location in two ways by crossing Lena Bridge and Debilly Footbridge.Submitted by amaliabalqis26 on
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