Essay topics: An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. write a letter to your friend In your letter * say how you feel about the visit * suggest what you could do on his/her birthday *try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea

dear friend, it is your special day. Happy birthday to you. I feel
exited
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about your birthday because you are coming here and
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can't wait to celebrate it.
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will give you a present and
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need your advice, i want
bring
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to take
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you to some place,
beautiful
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a beautiful
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plase
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place
wich
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which
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is
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a spesial
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spesial
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special
place
from
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my country.
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will give you some
clue
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, it is
beach
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the beach
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and
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hope you will be amazed
with
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at
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this
place. it is gonna be
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an unfogettable
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unfogettable
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unforgettable
journey for you
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guess. will you
accapted
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accepted
accept
my proposal?
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hope you will
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greeting and closing
Include a proper greeting at the beginning of the letter and a suitable closing at the end to enhance the personal touch.
logical structure
Ensure to organize the letter into clear paragraphs, each serving a distinct purpose, to improve readability and structure.
single idea per paragraph
Develop each point mentioned in the prompt in its own paragraph to maintain clarity and cohesion.
complete response
Address all aspects of the task more fully, including elaborating on how you feel about the visit, giving a clearer suggestion on birthday plans, and asking for your friend's opinion in a more direct way.
suitable writing tone
The tone of the letter is casual and friendly, which is suitable for writing to a friend. However, try to maintain consistency in the tone throughout the letter.

The Closing

The style of the letter determine how you have to close it.

Check out the suggested closing sentences for each type of letter in the General IELTS Test. The closing sentence should be the last sentence of your letter.

Formal style (To someone you have not met, whose name you don’t know)

  • Yours faithfully,

Semi-formal (To someone you may or may not have met, whose last name you know)

  • Yours sincerely,

Informal (To someone you know well, whose first name you know and use)

  • Best regards,
  • Warm wishes,

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