33.The chart below shows the number of international applicants from four countries that a Europena university had from 2004 and 2008. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The bar graph demonstrates how many international students applied for a specific university in Europe over a four-year period between 2004 and 2008.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that the Japanese applicants gradually lost their interest in the university, while
, the Americans increased significantlly
over the period in question.
Correct your spelling
significantly
Also
evident is, Japan
doubled from 5000 Correct word choice
that Japan
student
to 10000 by 2008. Change to a plural noun
students
In contrast
, Chinese applicants witnessed a gradual decrease from about 2800 to 15000.
Another important fact is Russia formed the smallest number of candidates over the studied period. In other words
, in 2004 it started to rise from about 1000 and peaked at around 8000 in 2007.Submitted by shamim1999
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