Essay topics: An Australian friend is coming to visit you, and it will be his/her birthday during the visit. write a letter to your friend In your letter * say how you feel about the visit * suggest what you could do on his/her birthday *try to find out what you friend thinks of your idea

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Dear Jass, I hope you're doing great. It's been a

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since we met each other, so I'm quite excited since I got the news about your visit to Canada. I want to make

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trip special for you through a lot of shopping, and a celebration of your birthday with our batchmates. As I know, you are going to be in Canada on your special day, so I already planned a private party in a famous club in Toronto and I

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invited all our friends here.

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party will be one of the most memorable celebrations of your life as I ordered all of your favourite food items as per your choice. In the evening, we will go for a long drive, where we will talk about college memories. What do you think about my plan? If you need anything

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, please don't hesitate to contact me. See you soon and take care. Best regards, Tajinder Singh

tajinder.panagWed Jan 31 2024

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coherence cohesion

It is important to clearly differentiate between paragraphs. Make sure each paragraph contains a single idea and that these ideas transition smoothly from one to the next.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that the purpose of the letter is clear from the beginning and that you directly address all parts of the question.

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When proposing ideas to your friend, try to elaborate more on why you believe these ideas would be enjoyable for them, to personalize the response further.

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The tone of the letter is suitable for writing to a friend. It's friendly, personal, and inviting. Keep this tone consistent throughout.

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Remember to use a variety of sentence structures and vocabulary to demonstrate language flexibility and range.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

160 words

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