The graph below compares the number of visits to two new music sites on the web. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph provides information about how many people visit each of the two brand-new websites over the
period
of fifteen days.
Overall
, what stands out from the graph is that Pop Parade had by far the most visitors and Music Choice experienced a fluctuation trend
over the period
shown.
At the beginning of the period
, Pop Parade with around 120 visitors was the most popular web than Music Choice, then
the figure saw a downward trend
until the seventh day
, from this
point on it witnessed an upward trend
and reached approximately 150, after that, the figure experienced a fluctuation trend
until peaked at about 170 in the fifteenth day
.
as regards Music Choice, visits to this
website started at nearly 40 and fluctuated until the eleventh day
, then
there was a sharp rise to about 120 until the next day
, and it peaked at just under 120 until the next two days. thereupon
the figure falls down to just under 80 at the end
of the period
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