The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one area of retain the table shows where the money came from and the chart show how it was distributed summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons very relevant
The figures describe information related to the
police
budget
and the expenses from it in two different years, which are 2017 and 2018. From the table, it is shown that there was an increase in all sources
of budget
from the previous year
, while
it is clear that
the trend on how the money was spent in each division are
not collectively the same.
The first figure provides three Correct subject-verb agreement
is
sources
of the police
budget
as well as
the amount from it annually. Firstly
, the sum of money from the National Government had a slight increase with 175.5 million
euros in 2017 and stood at 177.8 million
euros in the later year
. A minimum incline can also
be seen in other sources
from 38 to 38.5 million
euros in a span of one year
. While
there was a significant improvement in Local Taxes with an additional 11.1 million
euro for the budget
provided in 2018.
On the other hand
, another chart illustrates how the actual budget
was spent on fulfilling the necessities of the police
department in three different fields, which are Salaries, Technology, and Building and transport. Given the chart, the budget
for salaries decreased from 75% to 69%, whereas
the Technology field had a bigger incentive in the second year
of the period. In contrast
to the previous trends, the bills for Budget
and transport for both years stood at the same percentage of 17%.
From those two graphs, it can be implied that the rise in the expense of the Technology field is affected by the increase in the total budget
provided by three different sources
of money in the police
department.Submitted by mayfa.shadrina on
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