The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the consumption of fish and different kinds of meat in a European country between 1979 and 2004. 

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The line graph illustrates the weekly consumption of
fish
and other types of meat, namely
chicken
,
beef
, and
lamb
, in one European country from 1979 to 2004.
Overall
, the
grams
of consumed
chicken
rose steadily throughout the
period
,
while
the figure for
beef
and
lamb
experienced a downward trajectory. The consumption of
fish
remained relatively stable over the whole
period
. Regarding
beef
and
lamb
, in 1979, the amount of
beef
eaten was the highest, showing around 220
grams
per person per week and
then
, it fell sharply by nearly 50
grams
in 1981. Starting in 1982, it showed a dramatic rise for a
while
and
then
, dropped significantly from 240
grams
to almost 120
grams
in the final year. The proportion of
lamb
also
showed a similar pattern, beginning at 150
grams
in 1979 and ending close to 75
grams
in 2004. Turning to
chicken
and
fish
, the amount of
chicken
consumed stood at just under 150
grams
per week in 1979. It overtook the
beef
with just over 200
grams
in 1989 and continued its upward trend until the end of the
period
.
In contrast
, the figure for
fish
remained relatively steady throughout the whole
period
, from 60
grams
weekly consumption in 1979 to around 40
grams
in 2004.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, chicken, beef, lamb, grams, period with synonyms.
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