The graph below shows the percentage of households with diferent kinds of technology in the U.S. from 1995 to 1999. Summarize the information bselecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words
The line chart illustrates the usage of technology by households in the USA between 1995 and 1999,
such
as phones, washing machines, internet, computers, and DVD players. The unit measurement is in percentage.
To begin
, the use of washing machines is the most frequent with 80% in the year 1999. It also
has been steadily increasing since 1996. Phone usage is following closely behind with less than 80% and it also
reached its peak in 1999. Moreover
, in the same year, people's preference for using computers experienced drastic growth as well with 70%, starting with just 40% in 1996.
On the other hand
, the frequency of using these two types of technologies is not much preferred. Regardless, of the steady rise since 1995, people's preference did not change much in using Internet about 50% in 1999. The proportion of using DVD players has improved but not so much with barely 30% in 1999. It had its lowest fall in 1996.
Overall
, five types of technologies have always been rising since 1995, however
, the increasing percentage varies between each technology.Submitted by alyarachmadivaa on
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