The diagrams give information about changes in a student accommodation building. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant

These maps illustrate the transformation of a dormitory hall

over

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from 2010 to the present day.

Overall

, the most significant alterations involve the reduction of the garden area and expansion of the building to add

in

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several rooms and facilities. In 2010, there was a U-shaped hallway connecting the main entrance, bathroom, living lounge and

bedrooms

. On the left

side

of the hallway, there was a student bedroom next to the shared bathroom. The right

side

of the building

comprised

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a kitchen where students can cook for their meals in between two additional

bedrooms

. Adjacent to one of the

bedrooms

was a living room where housemates

can

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socialize in their free time.

Furthermore

, the dorm hall was surrounded by three gardens. After 10 years, structural modifications have been made to the building. The main entrance remains unchanged.

However

, a new en-suite room with a private shower and a lavatory has been added on the same

side

of the main door. The kitchen now functions as a social space for student gatherings.

Additionally

, the garden on the left

side

and the living room

has

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been demolished to build additional

bedrooms

which has increased the total number from 3 to 6. The garden on the right

site

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side

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of the building has been cleared off and replaced by a car park. Other rooms remain unchanged