The maps below illustrate a beachfront area in Australia from 1950 and today.

The maps below illustrate a beachfront area in Australia from 1950 and today.
The first
map
displays a beachfront area in Australia,
while
the second
map
illustrates how it looks now. Looking at an
overall
perspective, after seven decades, the local beachfront area has been modified and upgraded as it is visible on the current
map
that some buildings are no more and new ones have been established. It is evident that in 1950, the road which led to the parking area was a dead-end,
however
, it has been expanded until it reached the lighthouse. Beside the 25m
pool
on the east side of the beach, a surfing club was constructed. On the west side of the beach, the previously 25m
pool
was upgraded to a 50m
pool
.
It is clear that
a restaurant was built,
as well as
another surfing club which is located in between the newly-built restaurant and the
pool
. Another notable change can be seen on the
map
, as the playground which existed in 1950 is no longer there and has been replaced by a parking lot.
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