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Many people believe that formal 'pen and paper' examinations are not the best method of assessing educational achievement. What is your view of examinations? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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Assessments are vital to evaluate the progression of learners.
While
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method
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 argue that modern methods should are more appropriate. I totally agree with the latter view as there are ample reasons to substantiate it. First and foremost, the advocates of
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claim that it is the most convenient
method
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academic performance.
In other words
, since
students
, teachers and parents are familiar with
this
method
, the knowledge of the subjects can be
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easily
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Moreover
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 chance to achieve their goals.
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, since educational institutions are masking student identification on the
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 can get high
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 based on their answers without any bias.
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,
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written
examinations
 are not an effective
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assessment in the modern era. The traditional
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 scores are based on the
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 which is
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contemporary
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 methods like assignments and critical reviews are vital to
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 the
overall
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performance
 of
students
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completely
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 and
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evaluation
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 to assess their online learning
students
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 evaluations are imperative. In conclusion,
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provide convenience and equality for all
students
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overall
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 traditional
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written
examinations
.
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Make sure your introduction clearly presents the topic and your viewpoint, introducing the main points that will be discussed in the essay.
Coherence & Cohesion
Ensure that your essay has a clear logical progression by organizing it into paragraphs, each representing a single main idea with supporting details.
Task Achievement
Develop your main points fully with relevant examples and explanations to support your arguments.
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Link ideas and paragraphs with appropriate cohesive devices such as linking words or phrases to aid in the flow of the essay.
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Conclude the essay with a summary of your main points and a restatement of your viewpoint to reinforce your argument.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • formal examinations
  • pen and paper
  • educational achievement
  • assess
  • standardized measure
  • knowledge and skills
  • develop skills
  • stressful
  • pressure
  • capture
  • abilities
  • potential
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