Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.

Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.
The three given maps illustrate a number of dramatic changes that took place in a tiny
town
Tarnagul, which is located near Melbourne, changes occurred between 1900 and 2000.
Overall
, it is apparent that Tarnagul developed in a number of ways over a period of time. The most noticeable change is the construction of packing sheds and a railway station in 1950,
whereas
in 2000 it saw a sharp transformation with the construction of more attractive places.
To begin
with, compared to 1900, the
town
area
, which was in the middle of the map, was expanded in 1950. The Mandarins farm, which was in the south in 1900, was replaced with an
area
for cultivating oranges. During the next 50 years, the
town
experienced the development of packing sheds and a railway station. On the left side, there was a place called
dairy
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in 1900.
However
, in 1950, it became an
area
for lemons and grapefruit. Ultimately, in 2000, the lemons and grapefruit farm
were
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converted into a wildlife sanctuary. Packing sheds were transformed into a local museum and a craft market. In 2000, the
town
area
was reduced in size compared to the year 1950. The two areas for oranges disappeared and became unused spaces. There was a new tourist shop which was to the bottom of the main road. There was a new park established between the
town
area
and attractions.
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