Tarnagul is a small town near Melbourne. The maps show the town's development over a period of time.
The three given maps demonstrate a number of advancement changes which took place in Tarnagul, a small township which is located near Melbourne, from 1900 to 2000.
Overall
, according to
the first map, Tarnagul has totally transformed in a distinctive ways
. The most noticeable is the appearance of packing sheds in 1950 and more unique areas by 2000.
In 1900, the town area, which was in the middle of the map, was expanded in the year 1950. The Mandarins, which Correct the article-noun agreement
a distinctive way
distinctive ways
was
at the below in 1900, Correct subject-verb agreement
were
was
replaced with an area Correct subject-verb agreement
were
to
Change preposition
for
growth
of oranges. On the left side, there was a place called Add an article
the growth
dairy
in 1900. Capitalize word
Dairy
However
, in 1950, it became a space for lemons and grapefruit. In addition
, on the right side, there were two new places for packing sheds which was
next to the new tracks.
In 2000, the town area was cute in size compared to the year 1950.The two areas for oranges Correct subject-verb agreement
were
were disappear
and became unused spaces. The lemons and grapefruit farm was redone into the wildlife sanctuary. The places of packing were transformed into a local museum and a craft market. Change the verb form
were disappeared
were disappearing
Also
there was made a new tourist shop.Add a comma
Also,
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