the pie chart show data on how people use four types of transport. describe it

the pie chart show data on how people use four types of transport. describe it
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The provided data consists of two visual representations. The first report was illustrated in a pie chart, presenting
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information on how people use four types of transport,
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the second report was illustrated in a table, which provides the people’s reasons for using a car in Edmonton. As depicted in the pie chart, we can observe that
car
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have the biggest fraction amongst the other types of
transportations
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with 45%. In second place is LRT(Light Rail Transit) with a total of 35%.
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, the remaining transportations have the same amount with exactly 10% each. The table below the pie chart
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data about people’s
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reasons
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for using
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car in the city. The highest percentage is commuting to work with 55%,
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business is exactly 10% below it, with a total of 45%. The lowest percentage went to shopping and leisure activities with the same amount of approximately 15%.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 86%.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "data" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "chart" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "illustrated" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "provided" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "data" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentage" was used 2 times.
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