the pie chart show data on how people use four types of transport. describe it
The provided data consists of two visual representations. The first report was illustrated in a pie chart, presenting
the
information on how people use four types of transport, Correct article usage
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while
the second report was illustrated in a table, which provides the people’s reasons for using a car in Edmonton.
As depicted in the pie chart, we can observe that car
have the biggest fraction amongst the other types of Fix the agreement mistake
cars
transportations
with 45%. In second place is LRT(Light Rail Transit) with a total of 35%. Fix the agreement mistake
transportation
Furthermore
, the remaining transportations have the same amount with exactly 10% each.
The table below the pie chart informs
data about people’s Verb problem
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reason
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reasons
the
car in the city. The highest percentage is commuting to work with 55%, Correct article usage
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while
business is exactly 10% below it, with a total of 45%. The lowest percentage went to shopping and leisure activities with the same amount of approximately 15%.Submitted by helma.devina on
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