the graph show how liquid chocholate is made. describe it.
The chart above shows the process of producing liquid chocolate from cacao trees.
Overall
, the procedure takes approximately ten steps, starting from ripening the red Linking Words
pods
to pressing the liquid chocolate. Use synonyms
Furthermore
, it includes several machines to help in some of the processes.
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First,
the process starts by planting cacao trees. These trees are usually grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. Once the red Linking Words
pods
have ripened, the Use synonyms
pods
are harvested. Use synonyms
Next,
the white cocoa Linking Words
beans
inside the Use synonyms
pods
are taken and fermented by putting them inside leaves. Use synonyms
Then
, the Linking Words
beans
will be spread in the sun until they dry before putting them in large sacks to transport them to the factory by lorry or train.
At the factory, the Use synonyms
beans
will be taken out of the sacks and Use synonyms
then
roasted at a high temperature using a machine. Once it is roasted well, the Linking Words
beans
will be crushed and the outer shell will be removed. Use synonyms
After
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this
, the crushed Linking Words
beans
will go to another machine to be pressed. These pressed Use synonyms
beans
will produce liquid chocolate and Use synonyms
this
marks the end of the process.Linking Words
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