the graph show how liquid chocholate is made. describe it.
The chart above shows the process of producing liquid chocolate from cacao trees.
Overall
, the procedure takes approximately ten steps, starting from ripening the red pods
to pressing the liquid chocolate. Furthermore
, it includes several machines to help in some of the processes.
First,
the process starts by planting cacao trees. These trees are usually grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. Once the red pods
have ripened, the pods
are harvested. Next,
the white cocoa beans
inside the pods
are taken and fermented by putting them inside leaves. Then
, the beans
will be spread in the sun until they dry before putting them in large sacks to transport them to the factory by lorry or train.
At the factory, the beans
will be taken out of the sacks and then
roasted at a high temperature using a machine. Once it is roasted well, the beans
will be crushed and the outer shell will be removed. After
this
, the crushed beans
will go to another machine to be pressed. These pressed beans
will produce liquid chocolate and this
marks the end of the process.Submitted by helma.devina on
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