the graph show how liquid chocholate is made. describe it.

the graph show how liquid chocholate is made. describe it.
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The chart above shows the process of producing liquid chocolate from cacao trees.
Overall
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, the procedure takes approximately ten steps, starting from ripening the red
pods
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to pressing the liquid chocolate.
Furthermore
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, it includes several machines to help in some of the processes.
First,
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the process starts by planting cacao trees. These trees are usually grown in South America, Africa, and Indonesia. Once the red
pods
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have ripened, the
pods
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are harvested.
Next,
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the white cocoa
beans
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inside the
pods
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are taken and fermented by putting them inside leaves.
Then
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, the
beans
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will be spread in the sun until they dry before putting them in large sacks to transport them to the factory by lorry or train. At the factory, the
beans
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will be taken out of the sacks and
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roasted at a high temperature using a machine. Once it is roasted well, the
beans
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will be crushed and the outer shell will be removed.
After
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this
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, the crushed
beans
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will go to another machine to be pressed. These pressed
beans
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will produce liquid chocolate and
this
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marks the end of the process.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words pods, beans with synonyms.
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