The charts below show the number of Japanese tourists travelling abroad between 1985 and 1995 and Austra/ia's share of the Japanese tourist market. Summarise the information by se/ecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.
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The graph illustrates the
number
of complaints made about noise to Environmental Health authorities in the city of Newtown between the years 1980 and 1996.
Overall
, it is clear that
there are four different types of factors producing noise to environmental Health authorities. In addition
, between this
16 years, the Correct determiner usage
these
number
of related to
years is evolving for Change preposition
apply
certains
and decreasing for others.
Factories and domestic/household are definitively evolving, with 400 Correct your spelling
certain
number of
complaints for the year 1940 and ending with 1200 and Correct quantifier usage
apply
approximatively
800 in 1996. Replace the word
approximately
Then
, these two different types shows
Change the verb form
show
an
significant evolution.
Change the article
a
Also
, Road works
Correct subject-verb agreement
work
begun
in 1980 with almost 600 and Wrong verb form
began
end
with only 100 Wrong verb form
ended
number of
complaints, Correct quantifier usage
apply
wich
is very Correct your spelling
which
less
. Replace the word
low
Instead
of traffic noise who
is demonstrating a valued diminution, with 300 in 1980.
Correct pronoun usage
it
However
is it clear that in the year 1986
there is an Add a comma
1986,
essentiel
evolution, ending with a Correct your spelling
essential
number
of 600.
Who Change the punctuation
?
demonstrate
a contrast between all trajectories.Correct subject-verb agreement
demonstrates
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