The 2 given tables illustrate the number of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas across 5 countries over a 5 years period, from 1999 to 2004.

The 2 given tables illustrate the number of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas across 5 countries over a 5 years period, from 1999 to 2004.
The 2 given tables illustrate the number of Fairtrade-labelled
coffee
and bananas across 5
countries
over a
5 years
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5-year
period, from 1999 to 2004. In general, it can be seen that the
amount
of
coffee
sold in 5
countries
all grew
while
the
banana’s
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sales
increased in 3
countries
and fell in 2. It is
also
shown that the UK was always the top spender in both banana and
coffee
. At first hand, the
amount
of
coffee
consumed in the UK has grown dramatically from 1.5
millions
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to 20
millions
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euros. Switzerland
also
witnessed the 3
million
increase in
coffee
’s
sales
ranking it the top 2 in
this
table. After that, It can be seen that Belgium’s
coffee’s
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sales
went up slightly, around 0.7
million
. Sweden and Denmark’s
coffee’s
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sales
saw nearly no
changed
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Sweden went from 1.8 to 2
while
the other increased from 0.8 to 1
On the other hand
, the
amount
of
banana’s
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sales
only increased in 3
countries
with the UK
also
the most contributed to the
amount
of
sales
, from 15
million
to 47
million
euros, followed by Switzerland with a 4.5
increased
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in
sales
, Denmark only saw a minor changed from 0.6 to 4
million
euros. Sweden and Belgium were the two
countries
with the
amount
of
banana’s
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sales
dropped, with Sweden’s
sales
reduced from 2 to 0.9 and Belgium’s
sales
fell from 1.8 to 0.8.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "also, while".
Vocabulary: Rephrase your introduction. Words match: 100%.
Vocabulary: Replace the words coffee, countries, amount, sales, million with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "give" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "number of" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "tables" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 5 times.
Vocabulary: The word "changed" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "increased" was used 5 times.
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