The graph below shows the number of tourists visiting a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.
The graph shows the figures of tourists
visting
a particular Caribbean island between 2010 and 2017.The Correct your spelling
visiting
totals
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total
numebers
of visitors staying on cruise ships and Correct your spelling
numbers
number
that
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apply
of
staying on Change preposition
apply
island
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the island
are
rising gradually every year.
The 8-year period witnessed Correct subject-verb agreement
is
a
remarkable Correct article usage
apply
overall
growth not significantly interrupted by the stagnant year of 2016. To break the growth of the total down to the two specific groups of visitors, one group increased from 0.7 Linking Words
million
to 2 Use synonyms
million
, and the other from 0.3 to 1.5 Use synonyms
million
.
The Use synonyms
numebers
of Correct your spelling
numbers
number
wistiors
staying on Correct your spelling
visitors
crusise
ships are not Correct your spelling
cruise
steadily
.It increased a half of Change the word
steady
millions
ofUse synonyms
vistors
from 2010 to 2011.Correct your spelling
visitors
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declined
the
same Change preposition
to the
numbers
in 2012.After that,the Use synonyms
numbers
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rised
gradually from 0.5 Correct your spelling
rose
rise
raised
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millions
to Change to singular
million
2miilions
in 5 years. The Correct your spelling
2 million
mumbers
of Correct your spelling
members
numbers
number
visitiors
staying on Correct your spelling
visitors
island
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the island
are keep
the same Change the verb form
keep
numbers
from 2010 to 2011 .Use synonyms
Then
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millions
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million
form
2011 to 2013.After that keep the same Correct your spelling
from
numbers
for Use synonyms
3years
.And Correct your spelling
3 years
droped
a half of Correct your spelling
dropped
million
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years
.Change to a singular noun
year
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it kept the Add a comma
Finally,
numbers
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in
1.5 Change preposition
at
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millions
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million
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