The chart shows data about the type of books that people under 30 years old read
The table shows us how many
books
were read by people aged 16 to 29 in 2012 and the chart illustrates the kind of book
they read, whether it is audio, electronic, or hardcover book
.
Overall
, we can see that most readers prefer a hard-cover book
in all age
groups. The audiobook and e-book
have
Verb problem
are
a
Correct article usage
apply
slight difference
from each other. Replace the word
slightly different
Furthermore
, only a small portion of them do not read books
which will be explained more in the next paragraph.
Each person aged 16 or 17 reads about 12 books
on average with only 10% outliers who do not read. Moreover
, those between 18 to 24 years old, read 11 books
on average which is the same amount as the people above that age
group. There is only a 2% difference between them, which tells us there is a similarity in their book
-reading habit.
In addition
, almost 90% of the younger age
group read a print book
. The latter age
groups also
prefer that kind of book
, with around 70% of readers. E-books
took the second place but there is a dramatic difference between them. Lastly
, the audiobook was not a favourite by most of the readers because none reach
20% of votes.Wrong verb form
reached
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Vocabulary: Replace the words books, book, age with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "shows" in your introduction.
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Vocabulary: The word "difference" was used 3 times.
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