The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.

The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.
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The two charts illustrate information about the
fish
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imported to the United States of America. The pie chart displays the source of
fish
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imported,
while
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, the table chart shows the total
value
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of it in billions of
dollars
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.
To begin
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with, the year 2000 marked the time with the highest total
value
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up to 10.72 billion
dollars
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due to
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fish
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import.
Moreover
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, the highest proportion of exporters was
Canada
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with 60%,
others
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27%, and
China
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13%.
On the other hand
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, in 1992 the accumulation
value
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of
fish
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import was about 8.52 billion
dollars
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just a slightly below 3% difference from 2000. Most of the
fish
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were exported from
Others
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with 46% followed by
Canada
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and
China
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which accumulated 54% in total.
Finally
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, at the bottom, there was the year 1988 with a mere 6.57 total
value
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in billions of
dollars
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.
Others
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remained the highest source for
fish
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import,
while
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,
China
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switched a position with
Canada
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as the second highest with 30%.
Next,
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Canada
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was the lowest with 28%.
Overall
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,
Canada
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has had a continuous growth since 1998 which started with a mere 28%.
In contrast
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,
China
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and
Others
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have experienced a steady fall since 1998.
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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, value, dollars, canada, others, china with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "charts" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • primary sources
  • import
  • export
  • sustainable
  • trade
  • volume
  • shifts
  • increase
  • decrease
  • prominent
  • exporters
  • fishery
  • market dynamics
  • trade agreements
  • conservation
  • supply chain
  • trend analysis
  • economic impact
  • fishing industry
  • environmental concerns
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