The table below shows personal saving as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2010.

The table below shows personal saving as a percentage of personal income for selected countries in 1970, 1990 and 2010.
The table displays personal information about saving of personal incomes in
countries
such
as Canada, France, Germany, Italy, Japan, UK, USA in the years 1970, 1990 and 2000.
Overall
, the
countries
with high percentages, were Italy in first place, following Japan and France and the
countries
with the lowest data were Canada and USA. In 1970, Italy got the highest
percentage
compared with other
countries
, and in other years, keeping the same position in 1990, which declined an insignificant
percentage
to later in 2000 got down to 11,4. Japan and France were the
countries
were a high
percentage
, getting the same equal
percentage
of 13.6. Throughout history, those
countries
kept the same values consecutively. the country with the lowest
percentage
was Canada with 5.6 in 1970 and later in grew sharply to 11.5 in 2000 dropped significantly to 1.9.
also
,
USA
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the USA
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kept
to
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fluctuating in their percentages, being 1970 the year with the biggest
percentage
in comparison with others.
However
,
UK
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the UK
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got a little variation between those years, as
same
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some
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of Germany
keeping
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kept
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the same data in 1970 and 1990 to decrease
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by almos
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almos
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almost
2.3 in 2000.
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