The pie chart below show the makeup of the congress in country X after Election Day. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.

The pie chart below show the makeup of the congress in country X after Election Day. Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information.
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pie chart provides the ratio
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five different Congress parties which are been selected after election in the country X.
Overall
, it is clear The Prosperity
Party
received
highest
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portion of the votes,
while
The Unaffiliated is the one with
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lowest
percent
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. The day after Election,
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shows 36% of The Prosperity
Party
,
however
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the number
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Prospress
Party
and The Unity
Party
are 24% and 19% respectively. Looking at the scale of The Liberty
Party
and The Unaffiliated these are the two parties with the low numeracy 14% and 7%,
however
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The Liberty
Party
has doubled portion as compared to The Unaffiliated
Party
. So,
it is clear that
The Unaffiliated
Party
is at its lowest numbers and The Prosperity
Party
is at its highest.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words party with synonyms.
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