Your next door owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog

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Dear Mrs Brooke, Hope you are doing well. As we know,

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that

you have a

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small

dog name Broono. He is

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a cute and adorable dog but, he barks

alot

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a lot

day and night. I and my wife work from home and it's getting really difficult for us to manage the noises and focus on our own stuff.

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daughter has her university exams and she is more comfortable studying at night.

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continues

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barks, she is unable to pay attention and not only

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my son has his online classes so, his instructors thought that it's our dog that disturbs the whole class. I would like to request you to do something regarding

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issue, as we

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good neighbours and we are not willing to break that bond.

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, it would be great if you

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find some solution to

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situation. Best regards, Smith

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coherence cohesion

Ensure each paragraph presents a clear and separate idea. Group related information together for better clarity.

coherence cohesion

Use connectives and transitions to make the letter more cohesive and to help it flow more smoothly from one idea to the next.

task achievement

Always check the spelling of words like 'small' (spelt as 'smaall') to maintain accuracy and professionalism in your letter.

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Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout; the way to address the issue should be formal yet amiable.

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Elaborate on potential solutions to show more engagement with the task and to provide a complete response.

coherence cohesion

Double check the letter for grammatical errors and correct use of punctuation to enhance readability and professionalism.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 5.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 5.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

6 paragraphs

151 words

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