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Your next door owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night write a letter to your neighbor requesting that something be done about the dog

#door #dog #night #neighbor
Dear Mrs Brooke, Hope you are doing well. As we know,
thst
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that
 you have a
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small
 dog name Broono. He is
such
 a cute and adorable dog but, he barks
alot
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a lot
 day and night. I and my wife work from home and it's getting really difficult for us to manage the noises and focus on our own stuff.
Moreover
, my
19 year
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 daughter has her university exams and she is more comfortable studying at night.
Due to
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 barks, she is unable to pay attention and not only
this
 my son has his online classes so, his instructors thought that it's our dog that disturbs the whole class. I would like to request you to do something regarding
this
 issue, as we
our
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 good neighbours and we are not willing to break that bond.
Therefore
, it would be great if you
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 find some solution to
this
 situation. Best regards, Smith
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph presents a clear and separate idea. Group related information together for better clarity.
coherence cohesion
Use connectives and transitions to make the letter more cohesive and to help it flow more smoothly from one idea to the next.
task achievement
Always check the spelling of words like 'small' (spelt as 'smaall') to maintain accuracy and professionalism in your letter.
task achievement
Maintain a consistent and appropriate tone throughout; the way to address the issue should be formal yet amiable.
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Elaborate on potential solutions to show more engagement with the task and to provide a complete response.
coherence cohesion
Double check the letter for grammatical errors and correct use of punctuation to enhance readability and professionalism.
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