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Task 1 Question You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.

Task 1 Question You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table describes the changes of people who went for international travel in 1990, 1995, 2000 and 2005. (million). Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words.
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The chart illustrates the overview of overseas
travelers
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 from 1990 to 2005.
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,
it is clear that
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 the total number of visitors to certain nations witnessed an upward trend throughout the mentioned period.
Similarly
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, five geographic areas experienced a rise in the number of
travelers
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 from 1990 to 2005.
To begin
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 with, European tourists were recorded at the top of the list over the course of five years. It has seen a notable increase from 280.2
million
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 in 1990 to 400.2
million
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 in 2005. Followed by Asia and the Pacific, which fluctuated from 60.2
million
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 in 1990 to 135.8
million
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 in 2005. In America, there was a slight fluctuation in the proportion of individuals who went on vacation between 118.2
million
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 and 80.5
million
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. The chart for Africa exhibited an increasing pattern, starting with 18.2
million
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 in 1990 and fairly climbing to 28.7
million
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. The Middle East had the lowest number of visitors during
this
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 period, accounting for 9.8
million
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 in 1990 and 15.8
million
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 in 2005.
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