The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.

The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.
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the total value and the the source of fish imported to the US which
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in
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pie
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chart and a table.
Overall
, it is noticeable that Canada has experienced a constant decrease
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its imports,
in contrast
with
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which its
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source of fish has
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rapidly and
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the biggest importer
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the US. Looking at the details, in 1988, Canada
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played the role
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the main investor with a total value of 60% out of $6.57 billion,
whereas
China and other
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was
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left behind as
its
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imports only
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40% in total.
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, in 2000, Canada's import
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fell
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dramatically to only 28%,
while
china's
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fish
import
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imports
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has risen
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slowly to 30%, and other
country's
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was
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increased extremely to around 40%.
To sum up
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data shows the gap
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each importer
countries
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and the difference
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its imports from year to year.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • primary sources
  • import
  • export
  • sustainable
  • trade
  • volume
  • shifts
  • increase
  • decrease
  • prominent
  • exporters
  • fishery
  • market dynamics
  • trade agreements
  • conservation
  • supply chain
  • trend analysis
  • economic impact
  • fishing industry
  • environmental concerns
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