The pie charts and the table show the primary sources and the total amount of fish that transported into United States in the year 1988 to 2000.
These are data
of
the total value and the the source of fish imported to the US which Change preposition
on
displayed
in Add a missing verb
are displayed
a
form of Correct article usage
the
pie
chart and a table.
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a pie
the pie
Overall
, it is noticeable that Canada has experienced a constant decrease for
its imports, Change preposition
in
in contrast
with other country
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another country
other countries
which its
source of fish has Correct pronoun usage
whose
been rose
rapidly and Wrong verb form
risen
became
the biggest importer Wrong verb form
become
for
the US.
Looking at the details, in 1988, Canada Change preposition
of
was
played the role Unnecessary verb
apply
as
the main investor with a total value of 60% out of $6.57 billion, Change preposition
of
whereas
China and other country
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countries
was
left behind as Change the verb form
were
its
imports only Correct pronoun usage
their
reach
40% in total.
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reached
However
, in 2000, Canada's import has
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apply
fell
dramatically to only 28%, Change the verb form
fallen
while
china's
fish Capitalize word
China's
import
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imports
has risen
slowly to 30%, and other Wrong verb form
rose
country's
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countries
country
was
increased extremely to around 40%.
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apply
To sum up
, this
data shows the gap of
each importer Change preposition
between
countries
and the difference Fix the agreement mistake
country
of
its imports from year to year.Change preposition
in
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