Global warming is one of the serious issues being faced by people today. What are the causes of global warming and what measures must be taken by government and individuals in order to prevent global warming?
One of the most serious topics being faced by
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This
essay argues that the usage of coal based
energy in a Add a hyphen
coal-based
vehicle
is responsible for this
impact, then
, given a tax
increase for this
kind of vehicle
will become an effective and viable solution.
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manufactures
still rely on a Replace the word
manufacturers
combusition
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combustion
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results
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car
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safer
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price
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prices
affordables
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affordable
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gasoline based
cars, even though, the specifications and features Add a hyphen
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both cars are Change preposition
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simillar
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similar
Therefore
, the costumers
will prefer to purchase the cheapest one Correct your spelling
customers
rathen
than the eco-friendly one.
To tackle Correct your spelling
rather
this
issue, government
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the government
the
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electric
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car
maker
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makers
on the road
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price
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giving
tax
relaxation. Furthermore
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price
can be decreased significantly and have a competitive price
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cars'
quaility
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quality
also
improved.
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support
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supporting
such
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the electric
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vehicle
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goverment
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government
tax
relaxation could be the most effective and viable solution to help this
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