the map below show village of Stokeford in 1930 and in 2010
The two maps display different situations in the Village of Stokeford in 1930 and after 8 decades
The northern side of the village had experienced a drastic transformation since 1930. Back in 1930, the land right beside the river stoke was built
a
farmland, Correct your spelling
as
while
, in 2013 all of those have been reconstructed into various houses. Additionally
, in the east area opposite of houses, there was a newly built retirement home. Furthermore
, the roads had been expanded with more connected roads to each area.
In contrast
to the southern side, there have not been drastic transformations except the destruction of farmland and shops into the housing areas. Next,
the roads were similar to the northern with various expansions and connections to every place. However
, one thing that stood out was the school which was not connected to houses again.
Overall
, the Village of Stokeford has had a massive transformation after 80 years. In 2010, there were no farmland, shops, and gardens.Submitted by alyarachmadivaa on
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